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Old 27.11.2016., 02:13   #1
moje pjesme, moji snovi

Pozdrav ekipa!

Nekako sam spontano počeo pisati pjesme na engleskom i planiram ih uglazbiti pa me čisto zanimaju vaša mišljenja i kritike.. evo postat ću dvije pjesme..
prva se zove afraid of sleep...

Alone, in quiet of the night
Fighting with my brain inside
Think I'm gonna lose my mind,
If I don't get no sleep of tight

The clock is ticking round of three,
While the demon waits to set him free,
Still I tremble and i feel
The sunrise aching to break free

Chorus:

Afraid of sleep,
As I begin to creep,
Struggle waging deep inside
Scared I'm gonna break apart,

Verse 3:

Finally I chase the shadows,
And drift away to purple meadows.
Hope is waiting in a keep,
And I no longer die in sleep.

Chorus:

Afraid of sleep,
As I begin to creep,
Struggle waging deep inside
Scared I'm gonna break apart
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Old 27.11.2016., 02:14   #2
druga pjesma

ovu sam napisao sinoć i zove se fucked up...


So sad, feeling so bad
If I could get to her
To make me understand

Don't know what's going on
She's got me going like
I'm fully alone

To see in her soul
I should fight with the storm
Fuck I don't know the road
Cause she bleeds me to the bone

Guess I need the way to find
The place inside my mind
Where the good things are
So I can become alive

In fact, it's like a poem
With story going on
She won't be coming home
Should I let her be alone?

In the end, what I meant to save
Is that all we should crave
The inner peace and pray
That true love comes today
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